Уважаемый мистер Уиллис,Я пишу, что

Уважаемый мистер Уиллис,
Я пишу, чтобы претендовать на должность продавца-консультанта на почасовой режим работы, которую я увидел в газете, которую я купил в то время как я гулял с моей собакой Педро вчера.
Мне 16 лет, и я учусь в выпускном классе школы. У меня были регулярные работы няней в течение года. Мои учителя описывают меня как надежного, но я могу иногда быть немного нетерпеливым и капризным.
Я свободен, чтобы начать работу с июля. Я закончу свои экзамены в конце мая, но я планирую отправиться в отпуск в Июне. Я прикрепил копию моего резюме. Не могу дождаться ответа от вас.
С уважением,
Андреа Лири

Результаты (английский) 1:

Dear Mr. Willis,I am writing to apply for the post of sales assistant on a part-time mode, which I saw in the newspaper that I bought while I was walking with my dog Pedro today.Me 16 years old and I'm studying in school. I had my regular babysitter during the year. My teachers describe me as reliable, but I can sometimes be a bit impatient and Moody.I am free to start work from July. I finish their exams at the end of may, but I plan to go on vacation in June. I attached a copy of my resume. Can't wait for a response from you.With kind regards,Andrea Leary

Результаты (английский) 2:

Dear Mr. Willis,
I am writing to apply for the position of sales assistant on an hourly mode, which I saw in the newspaper that I bought while I was walking with my dog Pedro yesterday.
I am 16 years old and I'm in the final year school. I had a regular job as a nanny for a year. My teachers describe me as a reliable, but sometimes I can be a bit impatient and moody.
I'm available to start work in July. I finish my exams at the end of May, but I plan to go on a vacation in June. I have attached a copy of my resume. I can not wait for a response from you.
Sincerely,
Andrea Leary

Результаты (английский) 3:

dear mr. willis,
i am writing to apply for the position of sales consultant to hourly mode, which i saw in the newspaper, which i bought at that time as i was taking a walk with my dog, pedro yesterday.
i 16 years oldand i'm studying in senior high school. i have been a regular work during the year. my teachers describe me as a reliable, but i can sometimes be a little restless and fidgety.
i.to start work in july. i finish my exams at the end of may, but i plan to go on vacation in june. i have attached a copy of my resume. i can't wait for an answer from you.

with respect to andrea leary